Dirai the Harpy
Jun 27
1 min read
Dirai is a giant harpy and was the wife of a Torinian human named Dominik, a lumberjack and a carpenter. After Dominik is killed in a centaur attack, Dirai is left grieving and sorrowful but she typically expresses it as bitterness and quiet anger. I hint that she might follow in the path of other harpies who became disillusioned with the idea that predators and prey can coexist in Torin and eventually parted ways. The ring in her ear was made for her instead of a wedding ring which would typically be worn on a person's finger.
So,i like mermaids of felarya lol
Dude, I really never see very few people making interesting stories about the Felarya world like you, even though you try to distance yourself from references to the universe in general. If I could give it a grade, I'd give it an 8.7/10 (good work overall). You still have a lot to develop with the potential of your works. I also usually write stories and it's natural to feel discouraged when your work isn't recognized. But understand, anything involving vore or giant women is niche. Few people gain an audience quickly or have many related tastes, at least that's my view on your situation. I liked how you brought those drawings to life in the story without it seeming forced,…